Developing the hints into a readable passage

Points to note:

(i) Read the given outline carefully.

(ii) Be careful to connect as naturally as possible the various points given in the outline.

(iii) The conclusion is equally important.

A bee – falls into a tank – a dove flies past – drops a large leaf into the water – the bee climbs on the leaf – flies away – a boy takes aim at the dove – the bee stings – the dove is saved.

MUTUAL HELP

Once a bee went to a tank to quench its thirst. Unexpectedly, it fell into the tank. It almost drowned. A dove was passing that way. It saw the sinking bee. The dove desired to help the bee. It hurriedly flew to the nearby tree, plucked off a leaf and dropped it in to the water before the bee.The bee moved on to the leaf, dried its wings and flew away. The bee was full of gratitude to the dove that had saved its life. Afew days later the bee was returning to its home at the end of the day. It saw a boy taking aim at a dove sitting upon the branch of a tree. The bee realized it was the dove that saved its life. At once the bee flew down and stung the boy in his wrist. The boy lost his aim and shouted in pain. The dove realized the danger it had been in and flew away. Thus the bee showed its gratitude for the dove that saved its life.

Moral : A friend in need is a friend indeed .

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